Tuesday, October 24, 2017

colour poem


3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Isaiah,
    I am wondering if you have experienced the red soft drink on the floor! Ha ha that made me laugh. I didn't let my children drink red soft drink when they were little as I was afraid that would happen! I love hot apple pie, I like the idea of red smelling like that. Do you like chilli? I am not a chilli fan but yes, red tastes like chilli.
    Tania

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  2. Tena koe Isaiah,

    I enjoyed your poem about the colour red! I agree with Tania - your comment about what red looks like is very funny. In my mind, I picture it being VERY sticky! The smell of red makes me think of delicious apple pie. That's one of my favourite desserts on a cold winter night, especially with vanilla ice cream! Maybe next time you could be more descriptive with your line about what red feels like, as I am a little bit confused by that one.

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